• eddanja@lemmy.world
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    1 year ago

    It looks really good. Also awesome to see snippets of how you got to the final result.

    My only critique is the (test tube)? At first, I thought they were holding a can of air freshener but then I thought it could be a test tube or a a vegetable like a leek. The aroma/mist makes me think it’s a test tube.

    I was trying to think of a way to improve it (assuming it is a test tube). I think for sprite work, it needs to be over exaggerated. Maybe trying using a flask instead? The shape is a bit more iconic for the limited detail you can have in sprites.

    Good job though!

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      1 year ago

      (Different account, same user)

      Indeed, it’s intended to be a test tube. I think you’re right, an erlenmeyer or florence flask would work much better.

      Thanks for the feedback!